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i cannot really make out what is going on. next time could you try making darker lines? it's no offense, it's just the only thing my screen can really see is the person in front and a bit of the person biting.

the profile of the girl is kinda freakin' me out, guessing this is after she got bit huh?

love your shading and your awesome proportions. and from whatever i can make from your clothing is awesome too. nice lines. the expression in her eyes are great too.

Very neat and clean *thumbs up*, lines should be darker though, if you have a photoshop try and change the contrast and brightness levels so that the image could be clearly visible.

The hair, face and the body, you drew them very nicely i really like it because the sizes are in a very appropriate proportion. *thumbs up again*

Criticism.
well everyone needs it to improve :P so here it is.
1- there is something wrong with the lips of the girl. they seem joined inotherwords there is not much of a differentiation i can make between the nose and the lips.
2- Neck of the vampire is not properly curved.

You knew it already :P i think you rushed again lol haha.

I love your art ^^

Lol. I couldn't think of something to draw so I made this the purpose was not making it realistic though..Just to clear things out.......

but the body proportion is so perfect, u r better at than me. i so LOVE IT.

I have to bring up the contrast and sharpness of my monitor to the max just to see your work clearly (and it hurts my eyes a lot , and maybe others too) . It's too light . Try to give some darker outlines in the future , nya ^^ ?

Yeah, I get that a lot....