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PiRATA: Chapter 3
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Description
Ray wonders about his necklace and what it means as the Navy is close on the tail of the Fleury crew. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Preview
Chapter 3: Relationships of the Unrelated “It’s been how long? Man… 3 weeks on this ship and nothing really exciting's happened. Ciela’s kinda being nicer to me though…” Ray thought as he scrubbed the deck of the Lady of the Sea. Ciela’s footsteps were heard behind him as he turned around to see the captain in a towel like it was all right for a woman to walk around like that. “Um…” Ray blushed, “Captain… is there…?” “Oh Ray… what’re you doing?” Ciela asked him. Obviously he responded by showing her the sponge he was using and told her that... full text | ||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| *4* The Plot Thickens [Sep 11, 09] Reviewer: KupoSama Very interesting. I'd like to see how this necklace gives one the power to rule the seas. Not to mention that the main Pirate baddy kicks ass. XD Although I wanted to punch that Admiral in the face really badly. What a jerk. |
| *5* still awesome [Oct 04, 09] Reviewer: Saphirya Okay right now I just wonder who ( or what ) Zimmer is...and what about those ring that Teache talk about... |
