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Mein Liebe 3
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Description
The final installment of the Mein Liebe FMA series. It's been fun, and believe it or not, this one was the hardest to make. The plot revolves around Trish and Papa Hoho Elric. Suitable for ages 10+ | ||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Preview
Mein Liebe 3 The morning sunlight came beaming through the windows of the Elric home. Young Edward and Alphonse were still sleeping. Slowly stirring awake in the main bedroom, Trisha Elric looked up at the sunlight coming through the window above the bed. She saw a silhouette in the light and smiled at it... "What are you doing?" she said, her voice cheerful but still very sleepy. "Watching you sleep," came the reply from her husband, Hohenheim. His large hand rested lightly on her cheek, a smile coming to his face, though the sunlight would prevent her from seeing... full text | ||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| *5* ----- [Jan 05, 07] Reviewer: Sairisu I wish I could fathom the proper way to express how astounding that was... You expressed everything so well, I got so many visuals of different little parts. I'm unusually picky with fan-fictions; worse with one-shots, but this was so impressive, it really touched me. You manage to fill it with so many emotions, and chastity, yet you didn't cram it all in, if that makes any sense. I've never been able to witness someone delve into so many different arts without spreading themselves too thin. You do so many wonderful things, and each level of your talent is equally balanced with the other. You have such an impressive way of making everything in your head into a tangible form for me. I hope I can continue seeing each of your abilities in multiple mediums. Please continue to grow. I only wish I could of praise you finer. |
